Published Nov 5, 2022
2 mins read
400 words
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Is It Will Power Or Favourable Conditions?

Published Nov 5, 2022
2 mins read
400 words

I happened to come across a blog today saying that all we need is will power to achieve what we want in life …so it got me thinking if it really is true! Do I lack will power or is it the conditions that is putting me down and not letting me achieve success!

Read my poem and let me know what your thoughts are!

Will power is all what you need is what I heard 

And guess what! Am already a badly broken bird!

So can I fly if I try will all the power that I have!

Or will I be praised or shouted as one nearing grave!

The pain in my wings is burning my energy 

So tell me how to go forward in synergy 

My mind and body seem to be in an endless fight 

Figuring out and deciding what is best and right!

Everything in sight I have been using as a help 

But it too hurts and in pain all I do is yelp!

I too want to give my best and do all that I possibly can!

But all I have is few allergies and Sun's blessed tan!

Will power-do you dare to empower me??

I am staring at you in the daylight, do you see?

Am a helpless living being staring at the skies 

Trying to believe and make true all the lies!

But who am I to change anything at all!

Am just a nobody who is awaiting the great fall!

That finishes and douse the tiny little fire 

That I treasure despite all the falls and fake calls 

Now am slowing losing it,becoming one of the dolls!

That has no voice but is brittle and can break 

But in reality I want to represent the lake 

That is composed and calm all the time 

With it everything around too is in a rhyme!

Do you think I will better if am part of the lake!

Is it the favourable conditions that's giving me a break?

What do you think I should do and wait for!

The will power or the reality and situations at the door?

Thank you guys for reading my blog. It is strange when you are burnt that you hope you had better chances like the rest to give wings to your dreams! This just tries to say how the wounded bird(representing a person in trouble) feels!

Bird
Thoughts
Personified
Hurt
Willpower
Favourable Conditions
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aryan.yadav 11/5/22, 6:20 AM
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Awesome poem keep it up
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martin.d 11/5/22, 6:45 AM
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Well written
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__im_sharon_ 11/5/22, 8:41 AM
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sheetal.thakur 11/7/22, 4:29 PM
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Please view my blog
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sai.teja.k 11/12/22, 5:27 AM
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Nice poem. View my blogs also
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redbird7146 12/1/22, 6:25 PM
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Both
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maha.lakshmi12 4/24/23, 8:50 AM
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Mindblowing thoughts💗
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