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Presence Of Beloved In Life~

Published Aug 20, 2021
2 mins read
434 words

January 23, 2018

Story writing~

Once there was an old man. He was sitting on a beach, feeling very sad. He was actually remembering his old days of life, how he was living in his past time; now everything has changed alot. He wasn't having any interest in his life. He was thinking that now he had become old, his children were also not with him. He was feeling alone. No friend, no other one, nothing was left now. He was feeling and wishing to die. 

Suddenly, he saw an old woman coming towards him. It was the time of sunset. The sun was going down slowly. The sky was red in colour. All the birds were going back to their nest. 

That woman came closer and looked directly at him and asked , “Shall we go home now?”. 

The woman was actually his beloved, his better half, his wife. The man looked at the view of sunset, the atmosphere, and then at his wife. His mood started changing.

The man started feeling a strange sort of attraction towards her. He was living with his wife alone in a near by area. After looking at his wife, his interest in life and living started growing. He thought that if no one was there with him , no worries as his life partner would always be there with him no matter what.

He became joyful. Then, the couple sat for a while , and enjoyed watching the beautiful view of sunset. The man forgot every weird and disturbing thought after looking the beautiful and cheerful face of his beloved. Now, again, he started loving his life just because of the presence of his wife in his life.

“Life of any person is never interest-less or meaning-less when his/her beloved is always there with him/her.”

Hello readers!!!

It was a short story written by me when I was in 10th standard. My English literature teacher gave some random short lines and we were suppose to make a story using them and this was mine.

While searching my old belongings, I got this one. I used to think that I started writing stories/poems a few months ago, before that I never wrote anything, but after getting this one, I came to know that I was so wrong. I just never considered writing as “My kind of thing”, as I wasn't good at it and still, but now it's like my hobby and I am enjoying it.

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~ Newly Risen Sun

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riyality 8/20/21, 10:21 AM
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Such a beautiful piece, really heart touching!
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