Published Apr 1, 2022
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A Short Story:-mukammal Manushya Part 1

Published Apr 1, 2022
2 mins read
461 words

Nowadays there is no shortage of evil people in society.  But it is also not necessary that one should always deal with such people in life.  Sometimes good people are found.  That too in such a place and time that we cannot imagine.  I would like to call such people human.  The incident happened six years ago but is still fresh in my mind.  

Me and son Anurag had gone to Kota.  Had to return to Jaipur the same day, it was eight o'clock at night in Kota.  Kota is around 250 km from Jaipur.  It takes about four and a half hours by car.  We were returning to Jaipur.  There was silence on the way.  Few trucks and only a few cars were visible.  It was raining since I left Kota.  Now it was faster. 

 The road was full of water everywhere.  Inverted thoughts were coming.  In such a ravine, if the vehicle ever breaks down, there is no one to save it.  Doubts were rising in my mind.  Suddenly one of the lights of the car got damaged and went off.  Of the headlights on which the car was running, now only one was left.  It was early to reach home.  The children were alone at home.  I asked, where have we reached?  Saying that Tonk is out, Anurag increased the speed of the car.  The car had moved a little further that it swayed rapidly. 

 I asked, what happened?  Looks like the tire got punctured.  There was a forest on both sides of the road.  Silent darkness.  It was a new moon that day.  The moon was on vacation.  Anurag got down from the car.  It was raining continuously, but less than before.  Take out the jack from the trunk.  The tire started opening in the flashlight of the mobile.  The bolts were very tight.  were not opening.  Then two boys came out on the bike.  They came together after seeing the car. 

 They asked, what happened, brother?  Anurag said the tire is punctured.  Those boys said, let us help.  At first, Anurag hesitated, then agreed.  One Jana started opening the bolt and the other was lighting the mobile torch.  But it was so dark that nothing could be seen properly. 

 One said, if there was light from another mobile, it would have been fine.  I gave him my mobile phone.  The sympathy of unknown boys scared me too.  There were hardly 20 22-year-olds.  Don't know who are you?  If there were thieves somewhere?  I got restless.  Where are you going tonight?  I asked.  

He said, home.  where are you coming from?  A hotel is being built in Tonk.  We are doing paintwork there.  I asked you will not be late because of us?  No problem.

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ash.m 4/4/22, 2:51 AM
Maybe you had started with the wrong sentence 😅

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