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Shortstory - It's Perfect This Way. (Part 4)

Published Oct 3, 2022
2 mins read
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Hey guys please read previous parts as well if you haven't read them yet… it's good to understand continuity… 

https://candlemonk.com/@ash.m/Shortstory-Its-perfect-this-way-Part-1-6331342a24e096863efb6b85

https://candlemonk.com/@ash.m/Shortstory-its-perfect-this-way-Part-2-6333c025ce9dc636566bb026

https://candlemonk.com/@ash.m/Shortstory-its-perfect-this-way-Part-3-6335332ace9dc636566bb108

          Nurse had to forcefully remove evryone from my room, so I can take rest. But here I am feeling all alone staring at the ceiling. And I heard a voice, a soft and sweet saying, “are you sleeping? Can I come in?” I looked into that direction. 

            She was standing at the door, looking all worried. At first I thought it was some dream I am having but she came closer and said, “Hey, how  are you feeling now? You have made all of us worried.” I just smiled at her, I was feeling very peaceful while looking at her. I was not understanding why? But her presence just making me forget everything around me. ‘Oh god! I like her to much now… I love you, from the moment I saw you.’ 

           She said, “What?” And I realised I said that out loud. I messed it all up, so to just correct it I said,"I, I am sorry. I was thinking that in my mind but maybe my medicine is making my Brian all foggy. So I said that out loud." Then I again realised, what I am saying, I am indirectly agreeing what I said before, instead of denying that. But then I again saw her and she was laughing. It gave me relief seeing her like that and courage too. So as she looked at me, I said, “it's true that I love you. And it's true that I wanna be with you, but it's not pressure on you. You can tell me your honest feelings and I'll accept them.” 

             She looked into my eyes and said, “You know right, that you are in the hospital right now. It's surely not the appropriate place to ask girl out. So get well soon and join back asap. Everyone's waiting for you. And I miss you the most.” Saying that she left the room. I thought she shied. She said, ‘she misses me.’ That made me happy. But maybe god don't wanted me to be happy… 

          The starting pain in my stomach again made me realise, how terrible mistake I have done to confessing her my feelings without telling her my true situation… 

              - to be continued.

Hey Folks, I am writing this short stories and if you let me know in comments that you like them or not, it will really help me to get motivated to keep writing. You can suggest if I need any improvement and I defiantly work on it. will meet you with next Blog. until then stay tuned. Peace✌🏻☮️ .   

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