Published Jul 11, 2022
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Got Something While Clearing My Drafts...

Published Jul 11, 2022
2 mins read
406 words

Hello Readers!!

So today I found this piece of work in my drafts section. After reading this I felt like sharing this with you guys so here it is.Though it is still incomplete but I hope someone from somewhere in this world will find this broken poetry relatable.

She is no longer her
And this thing haunts me

Her heart is stitched badly
Her eyes are crying for help
Lips trembling to say "I am not okay"
Yet she is smiling as if everything is okay.

How can everything change
In just a fraction of months? 
A crazy, insane and happy girl
Turned into a sad, serious and worried one. 
And the irony is that no one even noticed.

Life is testing her badly
And she is struggling so hard

Though she is not ready to give up no matter what the circumstances are.

And last night she cried
Begging God to give her a break
Loneliness is surrounding her badly
And life is no longer a sweet cake

She no longer enjoys
Her favourite songs. 
She no longer sings
And dance like idiots

Sometimes I wonder
When wilI witness her again
That carefree, childish and epicure
Soul whom I killed myself in order to make her responsible.

Actually there is a story behind this broken poetry. Almost a year ago while travelling to somewhere I met a girl. She was a stranger but still, there was something in her which forced me to write this piece. A girl who was barely 14 years old was acting way more mature and responsible than me. I don't know how life is treating her these days but I wish one day we bumped into each other again so that I can tell her how strong she is.

Life is not fun and easy for everyone. Every face has a story to tell which they somehow try to hide behind their sparkling smiles, sometimes in the blanket of silence or sometimes by acting way too rude. So don't be quick to judge and always remember that you are not the only one who is suffering.

Sometimes I think how hard life is for those parents who can't even provide basic facilities to their children. 

Now think with the perspective of that child who grew up so fast that no even noticed. Life is tough.

Thanks for reading!!

P.S. I will try my best to stay active from today onwards. 😬

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newly_risen_sun 7/11/22, 2:39 PM
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Indeed a well written and beautiful piece❤️ You need to be active now🤧
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mkrate 7/13/22, 3:01 AM
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The poem is written beautifully ❤️
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shifanaaz112 7/13/22, 9:11 AM
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without suffering there is no life very beautiful poem
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sapna.bhandari 7/14/22, 8:24 PM
Nice please read mine too
kookie 7/15/22, 7:54 AM
amazing written
crazy.rainbow 7/18/22, 12:44 PM
Nice work why not to follow each other
sujeet84 7/21/22, 1:02 AM
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thulasiram.ravi 7/24/22, 10:40 AM
good one
mswords 7/25/22, 12:27 AM
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Nicely written 🙌. Really everyones life is different. Keep writing 😊
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nii99_99 8/23/22, 7:49 AM
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Nice poem with relatistic face!
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sumitsing 8/24/22, 2:47 AM
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nice poem
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anu_07 9/19/22, 1:51 PM
The poetry is amazing 💙

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