Published Sep 25, 2021
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Fallen Angel - Victor's Night Experience , Final Chapter.

Published Sep 25, 2021
3 mins read
619 words

Victor was confused , don't know how to react to the situation he is in," what is happening!!!??" He spoke to himself .

Moment later Athmika opened the door and slowly stepped out of it , Victor backed few while Athmika stepped forward, she trod as slowly she could. The gravel noise of each step raised heart beat of poor Victor.

Athmika came close to the huge gates and said " he is the one who took my life", Hearing what she uttered Victor felt a huge lump in his throat unable to swallow, he was frightened to the most.

Victor : " what are you saying?, what or you ?…. I mean who are you?"

Athmika grinned back.

Victor : " Stop it , now answer my question, who the hell are you?

Athmika : “ I once lived here , happily with my relatives and friends ,  the owner of the tea company took life from us” ..

Victor : " wait.. this is getting crazy , whatever your saying is unbelievable,"

Athmika uttered “ Uncle, believe me ", Victor was moved by Athmika's gesture.. , yes she called him uncle ( Victor hasn't valued relationships all his life but somehow when the little girl called him uncle , he really felt the trueness)

Athmika moved closer to Victor and touched him with her soft hands , all of the sudden Victor felt inner shock (kind of salvation) .

Then the unexplainable, unimaginable happened …..the whole place transformed into a forest he could feel the freshness, he  smelt  pure air, it was so dense , above everything it was beautiful , Victor for a moment felt heaven .

On spur of the moment ,. Huge earth movers , bulldozers, cutting machine of all size mangled the heaven and brought everything to dust , such a heart throb , very painful .Victor felt bone crushing experience.

Victor shouted “ hey brainless stop doing it , what a worthless morons you guys are !!… Don't do this stop at once!!!!”

Again the mangled forest which were brought to grounds changed to concrete building and tea plants around it . Acres and acres of devine forest got changed to a tea estate .

Once Athmika took her hands off Victor he realised that whatever he saw where past tragic history of the very place, now Victor realised the truth and asked Athmika " but what is it  to do with you" ,Athmika replied " I'm the one who was destroyed uncle" she said.

Athmika : “ this forest is the creation of almighty , and iam the 'FALLEN ANGEL'….

Victor : “ what can I do about it Athmika?, Iam just powerless like most of the citizens of this world, we feel bad for all injustice happening around .The prevailing  race , religion ,caste and  other  differences  doesn't matter for us, we unanimously feel bad if injustice is delivered but our voices are ‘ not heard mostly ’ ‘ our cries are dissolved in thin air ’ baby ".

Athmika :  “ you are a true soul uncle , that's the reason you could see me .If you can see me , if you can feel me, I'm sure you can be the change the world looking for, the change iam looking for ,you can give life to me again but it's a ‘CHOICE’, choose wisely!!!".

“Gather  like souls  , i'm sure there are plenty in numbers enough to outnumber the evils .” 

“ DO SOMETHING “ , ”Make a better place for all ……”

All This While Victor was listening carefully  , and in split moment Athmika disintegrated into sparkles and went invisible……

Voice from nowhere echoed " Not all greens are real greens".

Now what will Victor do ? , It's always the choice , sometimes silence against injustice is all also a sin ,  what is (are ) "V" ictor going to do? …   

                                 End 

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