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If Only You Smile And Wave At Me (Part 2)

Published Jan 26, 2022
4 mins read
724 words

As she was confused, she let him in or not… 

Her mother come back from work. Her mother came from office and just stand behind the boy. She relived as she saw her mother. Her mother asked, “Hey, why are you guys standing like this in door ?” He turned as she almost shout “Mum you came early today..” 

He smiled at her mother and said, “Hello aunty, I am her friend, I leave in a building front of yours, I just came to meet her. But she was not ready to let me in.” She thought in her mind, “ Friend? We don't even know eachother's name. Just what the hell is he planning?” But her mother i guess was to kind. She eyed her daughter as she knows, how mischievous her daughter can be sometimes, And let the boy in with them. Her mother asked him to take a seat in a hall-room and asked them if they need any snacks… 

She was totally confused with the situations they are in but she was alarmed as one stranger is in their house. So she almost glaring at him. As her mother went inside to get fresh, He looked at her and said while smiling, “Hey don't be so stressed, I really don't have any ulterior motives. I just want to meet you and talk to you. Can we go into your balcony, so we can talk more comfortably…” 

         She felt like a stupid for seconds, and she thought to listen to him once. She told her mother that they are sitting in the balcony and she doesn't need to worry about anything. He took a seat in the balcony and she set in front of him. Her expressions were still looked troubled Somehow. So he looked at her and smiled. He was actually a good looking guy wearing light blue shirt and black jeans. He Somehow looked like those boys from TV advertisement - Sharp and classy. And she, in the other hand wearing baggy black T-shirt with denim three-forth. Messy bun on head and oily face. As she realised that, it made her felt more uncomfortable. 

        He said, “ I thought, you will just storm me with questions as we meet. But you looked more nervous then me.” She said, “We don't talk with strangers and totally not talk with people's who came like ghosts.” He laughed and said, “Sorry, My name is Nikhil. I am S.Y.BMs student. We shifted last year hear from Pune. I was curious about you since I first time saw you from my balcony. You almost gave me heartattack when you smiled at me. I was so nervous, I almost tripped and broke my hand. It was fractured for 3 weeks.”

        She felt sorry for him as well as curious. “I am Neetu, and as you behaved earlier, I thought you are shameless person with hell of a attitude problem. And by any chance do you have personality disorder ?” She said. 

On her stright forward behaviour he laughed and said, “it might sound strange but I always liked to watch you. How peaceful you looked. I always liked that. We shift frequently because of my father's work. So I couldn't make any friends, even I was able to make some. I had to leave them behind as we move, so I just stopped involving with peoples and making friends. But I feel empty and lonely all the time. And then I saw you and first I thought you are lonely too, Just like me… But when you smiled and wave at me, I realised you are not same as me, you are brave… so much alive and welcoming… I just liked that in you and I am not sure but I think I fell for you…” 

She listen him quietly all this time and said in very calm tone, “Are you psycho or something? … Oh I got it now, it's some kind of bet with friends. Is this prank, you can tell me I can act more naturally, though” 

                                   - To be continued

Hey folks, this story taking more parts than I expected 😁. But stay tuned with me for next part 😜 anyways. Also Let me know how you like it in comments. Until then, Peace ✌️ ☮️ .

#Shortstory
#Friendship
#Lovestory
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nirmalafrancis 1/26/22, 5:07 AM
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well written, I think it was "snacks" not snakes it's typo just correct it.
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ash.m 1/26/22, 5:23 AM
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Yes it is "snacks"... Sometimes typing on mobile sucks & what should I tell you about autocorrect 😒.... But thanks for noticing though 😅
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thulasiram.ravi 1/26/22, 6:02 AM
Nicely Written.
newly_risen_sun 1/26/22, 6:52 AM
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Wow..I am loving the story tho', the straight forward nature of the Girl✌️ I am totally into the story, waiting for next chapter 🙌
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nisha.rajbhar 1/26/22, 12:20 PM
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still continue ...okay
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manisha_rajbhar 1/26/22, 1:48 PM
Keep up writing... ❤️
enigma_23 1/27/22, 11:00 AM
great...keep on writing
pragati.hanchate 1/29/22, 12:25 PM
Unbelievable like such a rocking story is this. Amused with the character's. 👌
ambz 5/25/22, 6:56 PM
Nice
sheetal.thakur 9/27/22, 12:48 PM
Why you.don't read my blogs

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