Published Feb 2, 2021
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My First Rain (Poetry)

Published Feb 2, 2021
2 mins read
424 words

[Read this beautiful poetry of emerging weaknesses, pain and losses, and how eventually you will find yourself out from the chaos thus learning ways to love yourself!]

My first rain
 

This too shall pass; And thank you to the "rain" alas!

It was raining so far...
I was crying so hard,
A quiet and painful night I've ever seen,
My heart was aching within...
To be honest, that day I couldn't stop crying.
I was trying to hold back my tears;
In fear, so that no one could hear!
But I say, I'm thankful to you "rain",
Your fellas... the "wind" and the "train".

My phone was ringing,
I ignored it, gone sleeping.
Constantly praying, the night to pass...
So I could ask, "was it prompt to say it all...?"
I heard someone, tapping on the ground,
I opened my eyes and found..
The ocean in the sky, clouds turning into species, "oh so creepy...!" 
I frowned,
I saw the sharks around...
It was my first dive into the blue,
But wait...was it all an illusion?
Coz everything started to fade, the clouds busted and I lose it all!
For a moment, it was a string of happiness gathered from my span of life so far;
Fortunately, it couldn't last!

I woke up hearing voices out loud,
Of cursed angels begging for hunger in the crowd;
The sunshine covering the marks of their sins...
I patted my head, remembered the fins;
And then I saw the man, who would be my past soon!
My eyes still red, of bloods from the sides;
Burning to the core, so does my heart...
It was not the pain to lose anymore,
But of rage to go and to find myself even more,
This too shall pass;
And thank you to the "rain" alas!

~ Reema.

Straight from my heart :)

A never-ending void, and my repetitive exhalation :)! Hope you all are doing well! Just be safe and continue self loving, exploring more of yourself, no matter what "they" say! 'cause it's gonna be you standing for yourself, in the end, and no one else!

Always remember that it's important, how you look at yourself at the end of the day because you will exhale that energy to the people around you and will reciprocate accordingly.

I will try to share, how I wrote this and exactly what inspired me! Till then, please share your valuable feedbacks and let me know how you felt, what you thought about it.... It's really important :)!
 

#love
#self
#improvement
#Motivational
#Winning&losing
#Poetry
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reema 3/2/21, 11:19 AM
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