Published Jun 25, 2021
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The Talk Between Body And Soul ~

Published Jun 25, 2021
2 mins read
435 words

Through this blog,  I am about to tell you, two important things related to life written by me.

The first one is a poem describing Need in a different form.

Here comes the poem~

THE NEED:

It does not depend on the minds of all

       the heart needs;

A call from the inner soul

      you need to get;

Doesn't make you a needy always

     a harmless selfish need;

Not in our hands to stop

    who can control their own               thoughts;

A desire, a dream prepared in open eyes

    can't let you close them;

Affects more than a future goal

   can't let you stop;

If you want to achieve big

    turn it into The Need

 The poem simple says , there is nothing wrong in dreaming and then struggling for fulfilling them. On your way towards it , may be some people will call you selfish as you will be only thinking about your own dream, but you just need to focus on achieving your goal, as according to me, if someone's dream is harmless , can't hurt anybody but just that particular person if he or she couldn't achieve it , then there is nothing wrong in calling it selfish . One just need to have the iron will for enduring their dreams .

Need can make anyone  do anything. So, if you want to fulfill your harmless dream then turn it into a need then you will definitely struggle hard for it and ultimately achieve it.

The second one is a conversation between me, my body laying completely still on the ground , and my soul .

My mind is struggling for getting the answer of a question . What is the question and who will answer it correctly? Let's read.

The conversation starts~

I asked to my body~

Am I dead?

It said , ‘Yes’.

Then, I asked to my soul~

Am I dead?

It said, ‘No’.

Questions and conflicts rises

Am I dead or not?

Body opposes soul

Said : Look at me ,now I am just a huge bundle of sack laying still, truly I am dead”.

Soul replied calmly~

From my sight,

We never die;

We are a source of energy;

Energy never gets destroyed,

just changes its form;

We will also change our form;

But never die.

Soul changed my opinion of death

We live for forever;

We never die;

Our soul is free; 

So , my question was wrong;

Instead of asking ~

Am I dead?

I need to ask~

Am I ready to be born again in a new form?

I hope , you enjoyed the both.

Thank you for reading.

~ Newly Risen Sun

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whiteear 6/25/21, 1:54 PM
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R e a d. m i n e. t o o F o l l o w. m e. t o. g e t f o l l o w e r s
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girl_with_dreams 6/26/21, 12:10 PM
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Damn! It is written so beautifully🙌❤
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unfold_it 6/27/21, 6:29 AM
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✌✌✌✌
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potterhead.forever 7/1/21, 2:43 PM
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These perspectives are so beautiful dear 😇
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rjangid 7/6/21, 11:12 AM
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nicely written follow me back i am already following you
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unfold_it 7/22/21, 5:13 AM
Nice picture 🔥😂
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