Published Jul 21, 2021
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The Conversation With The Moon: One Of My Closest Friend~

Published Jul 21, 2021
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Hello readers!!!
A story came in my head while taking a look at the Moon, thought to write it to you all.

Please read and leave comment.

The Moon, one of my closest friend, wanted someone to whom he could express himself.

I became that "someone" for him.

The day when I went to meet him wasn't a suitable day for any meeting and the time was the worst.

Storm was at the door step. Weather became terrible with lightning and thunder, cool air started blowing.

When I met him, I was just able see his partial face. It looked covered with the clouds of most dull-dim thoughts and feelings. His appearance has lost all the charm. Dark-shadows under his eyes, his aura looked pale (emotionless). 

I sat with him under a tree to hear his story, was eager to know the reason of his such condition. 

When he started talking, he wasn't looking at me, hiding something, trying not to show his full face.

I asked him various time to make it visible to me but he denied.

Then;

With a rough voice , he started the conversation. 

He told me , he is in love with someone.

Her everything attracts him. He has totally lost his mind after falling for her.

She is the chosen one, he knows.

He said that he had tried every suitable method to impress her, to make her only his but nothing helped.

He started describing by composing a poem~

"I tried so hard but nothing helped me ever,

Still my mind and heart never let me stop to endeavour;

I have made hard efforts to make 

her attracted towards me,

I have tried to change my appearance each day and every minute to increase her affection towards me;

But all she saw was that one mark over my face,

Never considered herself to ask me, what was the case?

I am losing my hope,

Will I ever get the position at her heart's top?

Oh friend, help me if you can,

Otherwise my life will spend just being her stan; "

After listening his story,I became speechless. What should I say? I didn't know. 

It was clear that the weather was actually the imprint of his emotions.

Then, he moved a little and showed his whole face but took the promise first that I wouldn't leave him after watching it.

Why would I?

I saw that mark. I heard the whole story.

But still, I don't know what to say?

I am not having any solution for his problem.

Tell me ,how someone like me will have who is also suffering with the same pain?

It was just a random thought.

Thank you for reading.

~ Newly Risen Sun

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royanupam033 7/21/21, 7:16 AM
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Fantastic imagination. Enjoyed reading.
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unfold_it 7/21/21, 7:18 AM
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Bht acha h.. Deep imagination.. Creativeness.. Thoughtful ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ
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riya0528 7/21/21, 7:25 AM
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Very well written.....please read mine too.
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banhisikha_12 7/21/21, 7:44 AM
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Nicely written๐Ÿ“ Please follow me and read my blogs๐Ÿ˜Š
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pri_4 7/21/21, 9:18 AM
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Nice blog. Do read mine too and follow back
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shwxtx 7/21/21, 2:02 PM
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So beautiful ๐Ÿ’–
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riyality 7/21/21, 4:47 PM
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This is very beautiful my friend! โค๏ธ๐Ÿฅบ
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potterhead.forever 7/22/21, 3:43 AM
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