Published Jul 18, 2022
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The Encounter With The Cold Eyes: Part 2~

Published Jul 18, 2022
2 mins read
477 words

                     "CHAPTER: 2"

I went to the seat and in a formal tone addressed to the young lady sitting on "My Seat". I tried to act normal with utmost care and without sounding much eager or even a bit rude, spoke politely and asked to change the seat as I wanted to spare my best moment with my best seat but....
 

For my very surprise, she replied in the most impolite way and I was astonished by her disagreeable behaviour when she rejected my request without even considering it for a second thought and showed the way towards another seat through her hand. 

Though, such an ill-mannered act, full of rudeness, wasn't acceptable to me and made me feel frustrated and my brain burnt for more savage replies and angry come backs but still I resisted the urge to talk back and without saying anything much, bowed, and sat over the seat which was the only available one at the moment situated near to the most non-artistic and pale looking wall, even the curtains made the corner look more depressing and my heart ached a little after taking a sight of that seat again. I cursed under my breath.
 

To divert my mind and cool down the igniting wild thoughts from that lady, I ordered my favourite coffee, to light my mood a little.
When the waiter went after taking the order, my eyes turned to take a proper look of the lady in red. Head turned towards the window, half face covered by the curls of the shiny- cinnamon hairs and the rest with a hand supporting the chin (by using which she showed me the other seat). Her order arrived and waiter called her several times but she didn't give any response for few seconds, looked a little distracted and engulfed in her own thoughts, until the waiter knocked on the table and with a shocking expression, she, swears, and then, with a rough tone said, "Thank You!".
 

It was the first time when her eyes became visible to me. A beautiful shell like curve holding the depth of crystal blue eyes surrounded by long- curvy eye lashes magnifying her beauty but......the barrier, stopping to declare them most magnificent and mesmerizing, was the coldness, a deep emotionless sea was covered inside her eyes, decreasing the charm which they were holding.
 

Then, I opened my notebook and started making notes for the meeting scheduled for the next day leaving all those thoughts behind.
 

She could be gentle and nice, and might had a soft heart ,and I had definitely called her so if she had accepted my request and gave the seat to me without showing such an attitude or even could have rejected but in a polite way.
Nevermind.

I will publish next chapter pretty soon.

Stay tuned.

Thank you for reading!

~ Newly Risen Sun

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girl_with_dreams 7/18/22, 10:55 AM
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mswords 7/19/22, 10:42 AM
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You have described beauty her eyes with really nice words, I loved it.
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