Published Nov 7, 2022
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If Only Time Freezed With Our Ancestors!

Published Nov 7, 2022
2 mins read
402 words

I know all of you find it funny when ai say if only time freezed with our ancestors!….I meant the time when we had the barter system where each family shares what they have with the other for what they need!…Absolutely nothing was dependent on money!!Nobody wanted to cheat,scam or ransack! People and mindset was simple where all knew who was staying next door and all were there for each other….here's a glimpse of my thoughts through this poem…..

Life has been tough running behind the money 

Else you can be sure nobody will be there to call you honey!

Every relationship and acquaintance is weighed!

Even justice is adjusted and can be simply slayed!

Your passion can push you easily to the roads 

So you sit in front of systems where work loads!

Self satisfaction and happiness is long lost 

Even a family trip makes you know penny's cost!

You are unaware of the tears and screams next door!

You are only worried about a speck and clear floor!

To show off how much you have gained overtime!

Everyone slowly have started behaving like slime!

Easily twisting off from all situations possible!

Making you struggle and your efforts should double!

If only someone cared to share your burden 

If only others burden bothered you all of a sudden 

Caring and being there for each other physically 

As now everyone is taunted and caught emotionally 

Emotions overpowering logic making all relations stranded!

All act and talk as if you can,conversation ended!

But at the end of the day it is only totalling 

Your gains and losses and how to keep going 

You forget the mind and health that is getting lost 

Your mind is for the devil playing a host!

Forgetting all the good you ever had you keep running!

It is a race to be the the best than the rest 

All just forget it might be the Almighty's test!

We are all part of a game someone is playing 

And slowly the family and belief is dying 

It is time we save ourselves and our near ones 

Be with our family with no regret for once 

Live the life with no race and fight for money! 

Let's not get drowned in the race for money losing our family, health and all that is invaluable in the name of money 

Hope you all enjoying reading my blogs!

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sai.teja.k 11/7/22, 11:54 AM
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Informational. View my blog also
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aryan.yadav 11/7/22, 2:34 PM
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Well written
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janvi.verma 11/7/22, 3:29 PM
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Nice please follow back
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sheetal.thakur 11/7/22, 4:32 PM
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Please view my those blogs which are close to 250 views
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martin.d 11/7/22, 9:12 PM
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Well written
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noorul.ruwaitha 11/9/22, 6:16 PM
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Nice..pls read mine too...
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srini2020 11/10/22, 2:13 PM
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Hi please read my blogs
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sudha.palanisamy 9/9/24, 12:53 PM
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Nice story
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natarajanv3 10/12/24, 7:14 PM
Thought full and every one would realize this

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