Published Oct 13, 2022
3 mins read
636 words
This blog has been marked as read.
Read more
Entertainment
Writing
Relationship

Shortstory- It's Perfect This Way. (Part 8) End.

Published Oct 13, 2022
3 mins read
636 words

         They got hope at their side. ‘Soon he was gonna get discharged from the hospital.’ he lied to her. As they were sitting on a garden bench, looking at the sunset behind the huge buildings in front of them.

      He didn't told her that, his opretion has scheduled for tonight. He said,"Hey, I am sorry for interrupting your life by doing everythin, I did. Because of me, you have to trouble and run inbetween hospital and restaurant. And you know what, I wanna also thank you for everything you did for me. My words might can't even express how grateful I am. You like gave me a new life, a second chance to live. You can't even imagine your words, your saying ‘Yes’ to my proposal had saved me, otherwise I was dead inside far before."  

        She looked at him, her eyes were filled with tears. He looked towards her and got stunned. She said in shaking voice, “What's wrong with you? Why you suddenly saying all this things?” She were on verge of crying and he was just staring at her feeling ack in his heart. A sweet ack. A kinda likeable feeling. 

She continued, “ for your information, I am not doing any social work. Not fulfilling any dieing person's last wish. So stop saying it was act of sympathy. If you want I'll say out loud again, I love you. I love you so much. I love you to the point where I am wishing to live with you forever and ever. I am dreaming of growing old and grey by your side, watching many sunset like this… do you understand now, what I really feel about you!” 

          He was just stucked there, looking at her. He was feeling the fountain of emotions exploding inside him. He was just not able to process what's exactly going on. He felt that puer happiness. The happiness that only can be felt and not tell in words. His heart shaking from that happiness. He was feeling like shouting and telling everyone that she loves him and feel the same way what he felt. 

He just grabbed her hand and pulled her into his arms. He hugged her. She was able to hear his speedy racing heart. She looked towards him and smiled. It was like they had got everything they wanted in life. It was like they had found the missing piece in each other and now they are complete… They just wanted to sit there looking and smiling at each other. But nurse came to take him inside the hospital. 

           He was smiling, lying on his hospital bed, thinking - ‘how amazing it all felt. How amazing it is to be in love.’ He was happy like there nothing left to make him worry.

Doctor knocked  on door reminding him the crucial reality, to be ready for opretion. So before he passout because of anaesthesia, he grabbed a pen-paper and  scribbled something over it…

           Next morning she came running to the hospital. She received a call from his father in the morning, informing her that he couldn't make it through that opretion. They couldn't saved him. He passed away. She set on her knees beside that bed, where she had seen him yesterday, crying with a grief of her lost. His mother came close to her and said to her, “He left, my child cheated on me. But he had left something for you.” Saying that she passed the note. 

She looked at the note with the tears in her eyes and pain in her heart, which she might gonna carry for rest of her life…

 “The moral of this story is that no matter how much we try, no matter how much we want it … some stories just don't have a happy ending.”

                    The End.

21
6
srini2020 10/13/22, 8:52 AM
Can you please read my blogs and give likes
the_little_treasure 10/13/22, 11:11 AM
💔
sheetal.thakur 10/13/22, 11:28 AM
Please view my blog
ambz 10/13/22, 6:42 PM
Nice
newly_risen_sun 10/29/22, 1:52 AM
Wow....it was so beautiful yet heart breaking 🤌🤧❤️
martin.d 11/19/22, 9:33 PM
Superb

Candlemonk | Earn By Blogging | The Bloggers Social Network | Gamified Blogging Platform

Candlemonk is a reward-driven, gamified writing and blogging platform. Blog your ideas, thoughts, knowledge and stories. Candlemonk takes your words to a bigger audience around the globe, builds a follower base for you and aids in getting the recognition and appreciation you deserve. Monetize your words and earn from your passion to write.