Published Mar 20, 2024
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A Breath Of Redemption - A Short Fiction

Published Mar 20, 2024
3 mins read
621 words

In the serene town of Evervale, young Alen, a 12-year-old with an inherent softness in his nature, navigated the corridors of a convent school. His father, Richard Aldridge, a formidable businessman with a sprawling empire of industries, appeared oblivious to Alen's impassioned pleas to curb the pollution emanating from their factories.

The corridors of Alen's school were not as serene. His classmates, recognizing his gentle disposition as a vulnerability, subjected him to relentless bullying. Every day, Alen faced taunts and physical abuse that left him in a perpetual state of sadness. Desperate for refuge, he sought solace in an abandoned park on the outskirts of Evervale, a place where nature seemed to reclaim its dominion, offering him a respite from the harsh realities of his daily life.

One fateful day, as Alen ventured into his sanctuary, a peculiar occurrence transpired. A gentle touch brushed against his skin, and an untraceable breeze enveloped him. An initial fear gave way to an inexplicable calm as a soft voice resonated in the air. It introduced itself as Air, taking on a form that mirrored Alen's, albeit devoid of skin—a spectral, gaseous companion that defied conventional understanding.

Their companionship blossomed into a unique bond as Air, in its shapeless yet friendly form, brought moments of joy to Alen's otherwise somber existence. Together, they explored the town of Evervale, with Air's ethereal presence allowing Alen to soar above his troubles. The once-bullied boy found newfound confidence, standing up to his tormentors and, for the first time, reveling in unrestrained laughter.

Eager to share the magic of his invisible friend with his father, Alen insisted on visiting the heart of the industrial landscape—the towering factory that bore the Aldridge family's legacy. However, Air hesitated, its form wavering in response to the polluted environment. Unperturbed, Alen pressed forward, entering the factory's labyrinthine corridors.

Within the factory's confines, Air underwent a transformation that mirrored the darkness of its surroundings. The once-friendly entity assumed a monstrous appearance, causing a ripple of fear within Alen's heart. In a violent encounter, Air surged through Alen's fragile form, casting him aside like a discarded puppet.

Alarmed by his son's sudden collapse, Richard Aldridge rushed him to the town's modest hospital. The doctors, faced with a medical mystery, discovered traces of the factory's chemical smoke and dust deeply embedded in Alen's lungs. Their efforts to save him proved futile, leaving Richard to grapple with a profound sense of sorrow.

Invisible to all but Alen, Air emerged once more, explaining its monstrous transformation as a consequence of exposure to the factory's polluted smoke. Alen, though initially harboring anger, found it within himself to forgive his ethereal friend, understanding the sacrifice it had made for him.

The revelation came with a heavy price—Alen's gradual demise, the toxic smoke eating away at his vitality. Touched by the unconditional love Air had shown him, Alen watched as his spectral companion made the ultimate sacrifice. Air, adopting a formless state, delved into Alen's lungs, absorbing the toxic remnants of the factory's pollution. In doing so, it sacrificed its ephemeral existence to save the boy who had become its friend.

The doctors, baffled by the unexpected turn of events, witnessed Alen's miraculous recovery. The news brought an overwhelming sense of joy to Richard Aldridge, who, deeply moved by the extraordinary tale, made a life-altering decision. He chose to close down his factories, opting instead to embark on a journey of environmental preservation—a pledge to honor the enduring bond between Alen and Air.

The story of Alen and Air echoed through the quaint town of Evervale, transcending generations as a poignant reminder of the transformative power of friendship and the profound impact one individual can have on the world around them.

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